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February 27, 2009
The images in fire, or water by ~root-kite are well worth deciphering in order to gain a new perspective of autumn. Read it several times, slowly.
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Literature Text
were this blurred, we'd be submerged,
stuck under the waves
with warping colours & corals falling away
from a certain blue surface, where white animals are climbing.
hot & cold climb the same ladder into the eye
and we see everything sharper:
today there are sky-flags, halfway tattered.
browns & sea-thinned greens, then reds & great flames
are traditional
but the starving stag, steaming in the cracked courtyard
says blue is autumn's secret favourite, the colour of bruise & ozone & iris.
a leaf can fall like a cracked mast, or a dead bird meant for the ground
where the plummet loves death's rest; or simply a painted sail
that dispels the break of landlocked bone
& breaks the windy hierarchy of leaves ― a mess of fire, or water.
but this wading one-hand-clap falls like a berry
too ripe to maintain the grip
of its slim stalk limb,
here it cannot echo
or be poisonous.
the hole in the flank of a hare is invisible from a distance,
where a magpie thrusts its utensils in to taste something drowned,
somehow hot from newly plugged blood in veins long as roads―
somehow cold.
the trees, lit fiery & freezing, gape empty in the dark-blue night like fish.
stuck under the waves
with warping colours & corals falling away
from a certain blue surface, where white animals are climbing.
hot & cold climb the same ladder into the eye
and we see everything sharper:
today there are sky-flags, halfway tattered.
browns & sea-thinned greens, then reds & great flames
are traditional
but the starving stag, steaming in the cracked courtyard
says blue is autumn's secret favourite, the colour of bruise & ozone & iris.
a leaf can fall like a cracked mast, or a dead bird meant for the ground
where the plummet loves death's rest; or simply a painted sail
that dispels the break of landlocked bone
& breaks the windy hierarchy of leaves ― a mess of fire, or water.
but this wading one-hand-clap falls like a berry
too ripe to maintain the grip
of its slim stalk limb,
here it cannot echo
or be poisonous.
the hole in the flank of a hare is invisible from a distance,
where a magpie thrusts its utensils in to taste something drowned,
somehow hot from newly plugged blood in veins long as roads―
somehow cold.
the trees, lit fiery & freezing, gape empty in the dark-blue night like fish.
Literature
You Underneath
You
underneath,
brushing the willow,
swallow many branches, while
brushing the willow
underneath
you.
Silence,
they hear the
scratch, the bark
at the back of your throat.
Scratch the bark,
they hear the
silence.
You
underneath
brushing the willow,
silence!
They hear the
scratch, the bark
at the back of your throat;
scratch the bark
they hear the
silence,
brushing the willow
underneath
you.
Literature
Winter Haiku
1.
empty feeders sway
in cold wind
sparrows line the fence
2.
fallow fields lie
silent under snow
three crows caw
3.
frozen pond sprouts
jagged holes beneath axes
huddled cows wait
4.
beside highway
white truck frost-covered
red gas can
5.
yellow train idles
on frozen tracks
steam hides the wheels
6.
the heater blows
hot on my face
chapped skin
7.
brown ice
in drainage ditches
cars pass quickly
8.
deep green leaves
clusters of bright red berries
heavenly bamboo
9.
sunflower seed
flocks of yellow finches
two red birds
10.
baking bread scents
kitchen with clean windows
children smile
11.
hot and cold cl
Literature
Friction
Sparkling sapphire, like green to grey
translocated turn and, we'll be okay
meet my mouth, like grass to gravel
dislocate disks and, watch me unravel
Punctuated pink, like shells to the shore
bare backs and, drums and more
Feline flesh like, moths to flames
writhing words and, shouting names
loose limbs like , bodies in beds
Reluctant risks and, butting heads
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this is the good stuff, like top shelf.