were this blurred, we'd be submerged,
stuck under the waves
with warping colours & corals falling away
from a certain blue surface, where white animals are climbing.
hot & cold climb the same ladder into the eye
and we see everything sharper:
today there are sky-flags, halfway tattered.
browns & sea-thinned greens, then reds & great flames
are traditional
but the starving stag, steaming in the cracked courtyard
says blue is autumn's secret favourite, the colour of bruise & ozone & iris.
a leaf can fall like a cracked mast, or a dead bird meant for the ground
where the plummet loves death's rest; or simply a painted sail
that dispels the break of landlocked bone
& breaks the windy hierarchy of leaves ― a mess of fire, or water.
but this wading one-hand-clap falls like a berry
too ripe to maintain the grip
of its slim stalk limb,
here it cannot echo
or be poisonous.
the hole in the flank of a hare is invisible from a distance,
where a magpie thrusts its utensils in to taste something drowned,
somehow hot from newly plugged blood in veins long as roads―
somehow cold.
the trees, lit fiery & freezing, gape empty in the dark-blue night like fish.













Comments
Also, 'veins long as roads' could get a touch-up to better connect with the intangible fragment 'somehow cold.' Images are crisp but need less crunch.
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Two guys are driving to work when one asks the other if he talks to his wife after sex.
"Yes," replies the guy. "If I can find the phone."
I like the trees/fish analogy too.
mech terms is a bad habit, will do something about that. thanks Martin
I am a little rusty still. Yea.
-- "for expiration's flavour" felt tacked on.
-- 'great' before fires .. iunno. Adjective-thick.
-- I sought the comma in the hand-clap line. One can read it several ways. How cleverish.
I very much enjoyed this. It has flavour.
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unknown command error: sleep
& thank you
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