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the regularyou have sea-freedom,      you amalgam,      you paradox of sadness      who weep secretly in your laughing chains,      and laugh in fetters of tears―   
I weave myself separate,  I am in the clack of the evening's spheres  & I move very visibly, subtly  through many trajectories. I set fire to dumb ideas,  I sit & voice & quaff and there you are,  sad sack,  gruff with gall & lost in your many wet sermons.   
I am not your brother.  I don't really think about you.  I think of w the regular
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noon's loomsnoon's looms  string loose taut bones,  and set fire to the stones  in the street's roofless rooms.   
noon's looms  spin nuclear & worn,  and blare their bloated horns  over clear, lazy fumes―   
trees are opening the palms of their hands,  with their lines of fate  borne low with the waiting leaves' weight,  & drawn on the noon-air's sand.   
birds are screaming and surprise themselves  with their leaps & caresses & fights;  their wings are still much too bright,  and the winds are collapsing shelves.   
men in the road are all clear as noon's looms
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fire, or waterwere this blurred, we'd be submerged,  stuck under the waves  with warping colours & corals falling away  from a certain blue surface, where white animals are climbing.      hot & cold climb the same ladder into the eye      and we see everything sharper:   
today there are sky-flags, halfway tattered.  browns & sea-thinned greens, then reds & great flames  are traditional  but the starving stag, steaming in the cracked courtyard  says blue is autumn's secret favourite, the colour of bruise & ozone & iris.  
 
a leaf can fall like a cracke fire, or water
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    ^SparrowSong:iconSparrowSong: 18 hours 1 minute ago
    To be fair, most DDs get more comments than yours. Go figure.
    ^SparrowSong:iconSparrowSong: 21 hours 48 minutes ago
    It's a good poem (though I used 'noon looms' wayyy before you). ;P
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    =mode-de-vie:iconmode-de-vie: 1 day 11 hours ago
    Congratulations on your Daily Deviation! :) I've placed a link to it in the sidebar of my journal page.

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    ~KorpiHunaja:iconKorpiHunaja: Apr 21, 2009, 7:28:16 AM
    missed your "homecoming" with the doubledecker since i was abroad for the greater part of last autumn. good to have you back, and sorry for the lingustic mutilation with the other comment.
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    `ATrue:iconATrue: Mar 22, 2009, 1:49:04 PM
    This time, the poem you suggested to *TheFavoritesProject really has been featured! :D [link]

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    =nycterent:iconnycterent: Mar 11, 2009, 5:01:32 PM
    Hello there you. Write more, k?
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    ~Amerill:iconAmerill: Feb 27, 2009, 6:13:04 PM
    I wish there were more of your work to read. <3

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    *TheFavoritesProject:iconTheFavoritesProject: Feb 22, 2009, 7:43:39 PM
    The poem you suggested has been featured! [link] Thanks for participating in the group and we hope to see more suggestions from you in the future.
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    *TheFavoritesProject:iconTheFavoritesProject: Feb 22, 2009, 7:44:49 PM
    Oops, I meant to post this on ~seeyouinjune's account. :)
    `fleet21:iconfleet21: Feb 2, 2009, 8:39:50 AM
    You've been tagged!


    Somebody pasted a generic comment on your userpage due to a bit of work! Please come visit our page and make us famous! wooooooooo.

    Sup cynicism.

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